Talk:Introduction to RISC OS


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Ugh, that's a lot of verbiage added.


- remove the informal "I", "you", etc. - Add references for some of the claims. - Take out some of the subjective stuff like "rather cheaply".

If you wish to do an opinion piece on ROL/ROOL etc, then it might be better on personal wiki page. I'd prefer the main pages stick to referenced facts. --Pnaulls 19:03, 6 July 2011 (UTC)

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